The prompt for August’s Inklings link-up (check out Heidi’s post here for the rules to link up!) is a breadmaking scene in book or film. For some reason I had an extraordinarily hard time thinking of breadmaking scenes, and the one I finally hit on features the finished loaf of bread rather than its being made, but hopefully that’s close enough.
This scene is from Eight Cousins by Louisa May Alcott. Rose wants to be better educated in the domestic arts, and has been learning to cook under her Aunt Plenty’s tutelage.
It was some time before the perfect loaf appeared, for bread making is an art not easily learned, and Aunt Plenty was very thorough in her teaching; so Rose studied yeast first, and through various stages of cake and biscuit came at last to the crowning glory of the “handsome, wholesome loaf.” It appeared at teatime on a silver salver, proudly borne in by Phebe, who could not refrain from whispering, with a beaming face, as she set it down before Dr. Alec, “Ain’t it just lovely, sir?”
“It is a regularly splendid load! Did my girl make it all herself?” he asked, surveying the shapely, sweet-smelling object with real interest and pleasure.
“Every particle herself and never asked a bit of help or advice from anyone,” answered Aunt Plenty, folding her hands with an air of unmitigated satisfaction, for her pupil certainly did her great credit.
“I’ve had so many failures and troubles that I really thought I never should be able to do it alone. Debby let one splendid batch burn up because I forgot it. She was there and smelled it but never did a thing, for she said when I undertook to bake bread I must give my whole mind to it. Wasn’t it hard? She might have called me, at least,” said Rose, recollecting with a sigh the anguish of that moment.
“She meant that you should learn from experience, as Rosamond did in that little affair of the purple jar, you remember.”
“I always thought it very unfair in her mother not to warn the poor thing a little bit, and she was regularly mean when Rosamond asked for a bowl to put the purple stuff in and she said, in such a provoking way, ‘I did not agree to lend you a bowl, but I will, my dear.’ Ugh! I always want to shake that hateful woman, though she was a moral mamma.”
“Never mind her now, but tell me about my loaf,” said Dr. Alec, much amused at Rose’s burst of indignation.
“There’s nothing to tell, Uncle, except that I did my best, gave my mind to it, and sat watching over it all the while it was in the oven till I was quite baked, myself. Everything went right this time, and it came out a nice, round, crusty loaf, as you see. Now taste it and tell me if it is good as well as handsome.”
I must say I’m on Rose’s side here – I don’t care what Uncle Alec says, I would be highly annoyed if someone knew my bread was burning and didn’t even tell me!

Have you read Eight Cousins? Do you have any amusing/edifying breadmaking anecdotes?
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Why Lizzie, what matchless timing you do have, I was just talking to my little sister about Eight Cousins not an hour ago!!
Right?? It’s just Wrong to let perfectly good bread be ruined all for the lack of a timely word when you know that’s all it would take! I would most certainly have been Put Out about it too XD
Heh, I’m always thinking I’d like to do one of these Inklings posts one day, you girls make them look like so much fun… And this one is looking like fun with a right good will😄 So who knows, maybe one of these days I’ll catch up with my ambitions, and join in!
Why, what very serendipitous timing! 😀
I know, right?? The Meanness of it, though. You could surely drive home the point that bread shouldn’t be left unattended while not utterly wasting it, *I* would think.
Oh, you should! The more the merrier, you know…and they make for fun yet easy blog posts, which is always nice ;D
Extraordinarily serendipitous😄
SURELY. With just a teeny touch of creativity!
Well then, I’ll have to keep an eye out for the next one and see if I can’t jump in on the next round or so 😛
Hi Lizzie!
Alas, this post reminds me I have yet to read “Eight Cousins”. It has been on my TBR list for such a long time… Perhaps over Fall break I shall read it!
My breadmaking skills are ** quite ** limited so I do not have any amusing/edifying breadmaking anecdotes to share – but your “Eight Cousins” quote amused me very much. 🙂
Lovely post as always!
Oh, you should! I think it would make a very cozy fall break read. And well, not having an amusing bread anecdote might be just as well…it means you don’t have any of those tragic baking backstories which make for amusing stories later ;P
“Alas ! for my maiden loaf! With rueful face I placed it on the breakfast table. “I hoped to have given you a treat, but I fear you will find it worse than the cakes in the pan.” “You may be sure of that,” said Tom, as he stuck his knife into the loaf, and drew it forth covered in raw dough. “Oh, Mrs. Moodie! I hope you make better books than bread!” We were all sadly disappointed. The others submitted to my failure good-naturedly, and made it the subject of many droll, but not unkindly, witticisms. For myself, I could have borne the severest infliction from the pen of the most formidable critic with more fortitude than I bore the cutting up of my first loaf of bread.”- Roughing it in the Bush, Susannah Moodie
Heh, the melodramatic tone of this scene is very realistic of such occasions. xD Thank you for sharing (and for introducing me to this book, which I’d never heard of before)!
Oh I love this book! It’s so delightful ;D
I was searching for bread-making scenes myself, and hadn’t even thought of this one. Well done 😉
Have you read its sequel Rose in Bloom?
This might be my favorite Louisa May Alcott book 😀 I have read Rose in Bloom, but I didn’t like it as much…have you read it?
I’m totally with you and Rose! I understand the lessons, but my practical heart bemoans the waste of perfectly good ingredients!! I have read Eight Cousins ages ago, but I don’t remember much, I’ll have to pick it up again! Great choice Lizzie!
I know!! I’m just the same; wasting ingredients like that is just painful! If you get the chance to re-read it, I hope you enjoy 😉